Ice Lolly on a Sunny Day

Quick! Lick!

Icy lips.

Stuck on tongue.

Melting drips.

Nibble, nibble,

Slurp. Rush!

Chunky bites.

Lolly slush.


2 Comments to “Ice Lolly on a Sunny Day”

  1. The perfect licky lolly poem for a sunny day – I love it!

  2. Hello, would you be interested in reading my poems, I have only been writing for four months!!, so don’t expect anything mind blowing!. I would love some constructive feedback from a professional/ far more experienced writer.
    My web address is
    I know it’s a big ask, but life’s too short to not try!.

    Best wishes,


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